雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核,综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力,实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说,也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了雅思口语focus范文 雅思口语Part2范文:有趣的歌曲,希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题,敬请关注。
雅思作文的满分是9分,所以5分只能算是一个及格分数吧!那么达到这个分数难不难呢?下面就和的我一起来看看雅思作文5分如何达到?
Task2:
Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and what extent do you agree or disagree?
如今,媒体报道的趋势更侧重于报道社会问题和突发事件,而忽视社会的积极发展。一些人认为这对于个人和社会都是有害的。你是否同意这种观点?
改前解析:
这是一篇媒体话题类大作文,题目类型为Opinion Question 观点型。
题目特点:一般此类问题问你是否赞同题目所表述的观点,赞同不赞同或者一部分赞同,都需要给出具体的原因和解释。
具体的构思流程,Vicky在往期推送:中已经提到,童鞋们可以再复习一遍哦!
下面我们来看一篇考鸭的范文,
擦亮你的眼睛来找茬吧!
考生范文:
The current phenomenon of media overly focus on reporting issues and emergencies rather than positive developmentshave turned the spotlight on whether it is a positive or negative me,this could be beneficial for individuals but might be harmful to society as a whole.
Receiving accurate information of emergencies and problems could give individuals warnings. For instance, informuion including environmental problems such as air pollution is vital to pass on to the public through media. Without such information, people might keep polluting the environment until there is no solution and the world would become unlivable. Besides , delivering important emergency warnings in time could save people's lives. For example,in China, thousands of people evacuated in time before the flood came in June 1998 merely because tv and radios broadcasted the emergency warning the night before the flooding. Therefore, delivering information regards to issues and emergencies is beneficial to individuals.
However,media's overly focus on pmblems and emergencies could lead to panic and chaos in society. There is a board consensus that public panic could result in unnecessary catastrophic chaos in society. Take the incident in Wuxi China as an example. In July 2021, a reporter in a local TV station reported a story about how the local factory has polluted the water source by pouring toxic chemicals into the river. Overnight, all the bottled water in the supermarkets was cleared out by local residents. Some people, misled by the media and filled with fears, even started a fight with the others in a shop over a bottle of water. That incident led to twenty-five *s and one child injured. Later the government issued a statement indicating that the amount of chemicals poured in the river was so *all that it could not cause any serious health damage to human bodies. Accordingly, it is the media which spreading rumors about emergencies and problems that could harm the society.
In a nutshell,delivering reports which focus on problems and emergencies could be advantageous to individuals, nevertheless, it could also be harmful to society as a whole.
你能找出几处错误?
你给这篇作文打几分?
下面来看看Vicky如何精改,
同学们不仅要注意识别丢分点,
还要学习和积累其中的高分表达哦!
精改范文:
第一段:
The current phenomenon of media overly ❶focusfocusing on reporting issues and emergencies rather than positive developments ❷ have hasturned the spotlight onwhether it is a positive or negative trend.主观点❸To me In my opinion,this could be beneficial for individuals but might be harmful to society as a whole.
错误:
❶动词形式使用错误,真正的谓语动词为 turned,此处应使用动名词形式。
❷该句的主语为the phenomenon,谓语动词应使用单数形式,改为has;
❸ To me 属于非正式的口语化用语,应改为正式性语言In my opinion;
亮点:turned the spotlight on 把焦点集中在......
重新改述了题目并明确给出了自己的观点。
第二段:
论点1Receiving accurate information ❶ofabout emergencies and problems could ❷givehelp warnindividuals and enable them to prepare ings. For instance,information ❸ includingregardingenvironmental problems such as air pollution is vital to pass on to the public through ❹the media. Without such information, people might keep polluting the environment until there is no solution and the world ❺ would becomebecomes unlivable.论点2❻Besides,In addition,delivering important emergency warnings in time could save people's example,in China, thousands of people ❼ wereevacuated(v. 疏散;撤出)in timebefore theaflood camehitin June 1998 merely because ❽ tvtelevisions and radios broadcasted the emergency warning the night before the efore,delivering information ❾withregard toissues and emergencies is beneficialto individuals.
错误:
❶ about用在这里更恰当。
❷ 原句过于笼统,改动后的信息更加具体和完整。
❸ 根据句意,regarding更为合适;
❹ the media特指的是一个*名词,包括电视、报纸、其他传播信息的形式,应该使用冠词the;
❺ 时态要前后统一,这句前面用的是there is 为一般现在时,所以后面应该保持时态一致。
❻ besides 属于非正式用语,不适合用于学术写作中,应该为in addition;
❼ 根据句意,应该是“人被疏散”,所以增加be动词were;因为具体指的是1998年的一次洪水,所以用不定冠词a; 洪水等自然灾难来袭,用hit比较地道;
❽ 首先TV应该大写,其次在正式写作中,不应使用缩略简称等形式,应该使用书面语;
❾ with regard to 为固定搭配,adv.关于;至于;
亮点:考生在这段的论述结构值得各位考鸭学习。
整段围绕开头段的主观点展开,阐述了两个分论点并以具体例子加以证明,最后再次强调了自己的观点。
第三段:
论点1However,the media's ❶overly focusover-focus on pmblems and emergencies could lead to panic and chaos in e is a ❷boardbroad consensusthat public panic could result in ❸unnecessary catastrophic chaos in societypeople being injured or even the incident in Wuxi,China,as an July 2021, a reporter in a local TV station reported a story about how ❹ thealocal factory ❺hashadpolluted the water source by pouring toxic chemicals into the river. Overnight,all the bottled water in the supermarkets was cleared out by local residents(精彩句子) people, misled by the media and filled with fears,even started a fight ❻with the othersin a shop over a bottle of water. ❼ThatThisincident led to ❽twenty-five25 *s and one child ❾ being injured. Later,the government issued a statement indicating that the amount of chemicals poured in the river was so *all that it could not cause any serious health damage to human bodies. ➓ Accordingly,it is the media whichspreading rumors about emergencies and problems thatcould harm thesociety.
错误:
❶ 前面为名词所有格's形式,后面应为名词性成分,而overly focus为动词形式,所以应改为over-focus;
❷ 词语混淆错误,很多考生都容易将一些形近词误用,再次提醒大家写作时务必要注意区别,拼写准确;broad consensus 是常用搭配,表示"广泛共识"的意思。
❸ 这一句与前面的句子太相似,语意重复,应该使用多样化的表达,进行同义替换;另外catastrophic chaos有“词语堆砌”之感,不是native speaker常用的地道表达,应改成具体生动的信息。
❹ 因为并没有特指某一家工厂,而且当地不仅一家工厂,所以是泛指,应使用不定冠词a;
❺ 该句是指过去的报道,根据句意应该使用过去完成时。
❻ with the others在这里没有必要,可去掉;
❼ that不太正式,并且在英语中一般常使用指示代词this来描述所说的事件,更加客观;
❽表示1-10的数字时,应该用对应的英语单词one-ten;表示11以上的数字直接用*数字即可;
❾ being injured表示受伤这种状态;
➓ which在这里是多余的;另外这里并没有具体指一个社会,应该去掉定冠词the;
亮点:考生的观点比较全面,在之前的主体段中给出了自己的主要观点,同时在这段中也阐述了“不实报道会带来的问题”,并以生动的例子加以证明。段落中还有一些精彩句子值得模仿学习哦!
第四段:
In ❶a nutshellconclusion,delivering reports ❷whichthat focus on problems and emergencies could beadvantageousto individuals❸;nevertheless,it could also be harmful to society as a whole.
错误:
❶ 这是一个非正式短语,在学术写作中尽量避免使用习语和一些陈词滥调的表达。
❷ 关于which和that,非特殊条件下,中国学生一般习惯互换,但其实两者之间还是有使用差别的,用which时,表示你说的情况适用于你谈论的所有事物;而用that时,只适用于你说的一些事物;
举个栗子,
All Dalmatians(n. 斑点狗),whichhave spots, are good pets.
这个句子中,我们知道斑点狗都有斑点,这里用which表达适用于所说的事物;并且whichhave spots和主语用逗号隔开;
Dogsthathave spots are good pets.
这个句子就是特指有斑点的狗,所有用that表示部分情况,且与主语间没有逗号。
作文中,delivering reports 后面所说的情况是部分类型的报道,因此应使用that。
❸ 两种观点间应用分号隔开。
亮点:总结段很简洁并且全面,还使用了一些高分词汇。
Vicky点评:
亮点:
该考生的文章结构和对写作任务的处理还算恰当,大部分例子中的过渡性短语比较准确,清晰地表明了不同观点间的关系;
个别句子的表达也很出色,用到一些高分词汇,已经用绿色标注,大家可以借鉴学习。
主要问题是:
1.存在语法和词汇错误,包括时态、冠词、介词、谓语动词单复数、词语混淆等,
2.一些非正式用语错误,包括缩写、简称、俗语等,各位小伙伴在平时的写作练习中一定要注意检查纠错,切莫让这些小问题积少成多,导致严重扣分!
对于国内烤鸭来说,口语跟写作大部分人成绩都不太好,而相对来说,听力跟阅读高分的让人比比皆是,但通过努力,取得一个理想的成绩,还是比较简单的。接下来我们看下,如何提高雅思写作和口语,怎么才能快速提高雅思成绩?
一、如何提高雅思口语成绩
1、找靠谱的口语外教
话题可以是描述自己所见到的事物,在旅途中所看到的、经历的事情。早晨可以想象接下来一天将要发生的事情,晚上再回顾当天发生的事情。在逛超市时的时候就可以告诉自己需要什么、为什么需要。阅读一篇报纸文章,任何话题都可以涉及一些并且给出简短的摘要。
2、尽量锻炼自己的英语思维
良好的口语离不开正确的发音。考生首先要确保语调和节奏正确,不仅是各自单独的发音,还有它们在一起时的发音。改进发音的重要方法是练习听力。练习的方法是对广播或电视节目(如新闻)录音30秒,然后自己重述,以此来对比自己的发音与广播电视节目里发音的不同。考生要连续不断地练习,这是一个缓慢的过程,在能正确地发音之前,可能需要重复多次很困难的发音。
3、大量阅读报刊、杂志及各种故事
大量阅读之后将它们复述出来,注意是"复述"而非"背诵"。同一篇文章的复述工作应该反复滚动。多总结雅思口语模板以及雅思口语考试话题。
4、下载BBCNews,或美剧英剧,进行跟读
考生不仅要正确发音,还要提高流利程度。流利指的是毫不费力地叙述一件事情。与是否可以正确发音相比,流利程度与心理因素有更多关系。要做到流利,考生要对自己的词汇量以及将每个单词以合乎语法的顺序组合起来有足够的信心。换句话说流利就是非常自信地用英语表达自己。
5、真题还原边听边跟读
在雅思口语考试前的2-3周,建议严格按照最新一季话题卡的口语话题来进行练习。可以找一些雅思口语预测题来练习,自己总结一些topicword。这些topicword能让考官耳前一亮。你要知道不能跟别人说同样的话题,但不代表你不能用同样的词汇。
二、如何提高雅思写作成绩
1.正式性和严肃性
正式的英文学术语言首要的一个特征就是正式性和严肃性,具体体现为不用简写、不用口语、不用个人语气、不直接引用别人的原话或对话。而学术文章则要求客观、严谨、条理清楚、逻辑清晰,没有或者极少个人的感*彩。
举例来说,我们在口语或者小说中经常使用词的缩写形式或简易形式,比如you're, there's等等,但在雅思作文中我们就不能用这些简写形式,而应该用完整形式you are, there is.另外,在论述的时候最好不要直接引用别人的话:如"......", says,而应该用According to 某某某,然后再用自己的语言简述他的观点,这样显得很专业。
2.经常使用被动语态
英文学术语言的第二个特征就是经常使用被动语态。一般说来,当强调动作承受者,不必说出执行者或含糊不清的执行者时,多用被动式。须注意的是,有时候汉语中没有“被……”的意思,英语却应该用被动态。换句话说,在写作文的时候,大家不要等到在汉语中有“被……”的意思的时候才想起用被动语态。
在描述事件和客观事实的时候,被动语态用得更多,BBC一则新闻的题目是"10,000 NHS patients 'to have genes mapped'"请大家注意其中mapped的用法,翻译成汉语就是10000个NHS患者的基因图谱破译成功,这么多意思,一个mapped就表达出来了,这就是地道的英语。
3.用词准确句式多变
英文学术语言的第三个特征就是用词准确、句式多变。用词的准确性和多变也很值得一提。例如在犯罪类考题中,如果问到“是否应该加大对罪犯的惩处力度”,在表达“(实施)惩罚”时,能用的动词就包括"to punish"、"to impose … on"、"to carry out"和"to enforce"。
这种用不同的词汇表达同一个意思的能力,能让你的文章显得更加生动。试想,如果通篇表达经济这个概念时只用一个简单的"economy",虽然没什么错误,但也绝对没有亮点,这是想取得高分的同学的大忌。当然,要做到这一点并不容易,需要大家平时多用心,多积累。
以上就是如何快速提高自己的雅思口语和写作成绩,另外阅读跟听力其实对大多数人来说问题并不大,这两门尽量多拿分,而写作和口语尽量少十分,定可考出自己满意的成绩。
为了帮助大家备考雅思口语,提高口语水平,下面我给大家带来雅思口语 范文 :有趣的歌曲,希望大家会喜欢!
雅思口语Part2范文:有趣的歌曲
Topic:Describe an interesting song
You should say:
where does the song come from
how do you know that
what does the song tell
and explain why do you think it is interesting.
Sample answer:
The legendary song Annie's Song'by John Denver is a piece of music that I really like. I like this song so much that every time I listen to it,I get a fresh and inspiring feeling. This is probably the piece of song that I have listened several thousand times.
This is a song that always inspires me and I like the lyrics and the music of this song. John Denver and his band Beatles and their songs are in my favorite lists. The 'Annie's Song'is a piece of work that the world will revere for a long. This is one of the most rated songs of the world history and I like it for the magical tone it has.
I listen to music almost every day and this song is in my music player. So I would say I listen to this music one in every two days on an average.
This particular song was sung by a gifted singer and the lyric is pretty impressive. The music and vocal was just perfect to make it a legendary song. I love it because of its appeal and magical power to me.
雅思口语Part2话题预测:有趣的歌
有趣的歌 Describe an interesting song you like
You should say:
What it is
Which country the song comes from
What story the song tells
And explain why you think it is interesting.
雅思口语Part 2范文:Both Of Us
主题:Both Of Us by BOB and Taylor Swift
口语part范文内容:这首歌是关于那些试图实现他们梦想的人。它讲述了他们的斗争,他们的情感,以及当世界拒绝他们时的感受。
I really love music and over the years there are lot many songs that have come up to inspire me and help me to get out of the rut that I am living in. But, the one song that I really fell in love and have enjoyed over the years is, “Both Of Us by BOB and Taylor Swift”.
The song is about the people who are trying to fulfill their dreams. It talks off their struggle, their emotions and how they feel when the world rejects them. The singer says that he is there for all of the people who are trying to fulfill their dreams. It is about how it is not about just lifting yourself from rut but also the people near you.
I love this song because in some ways it helps me to stay focused and move on towards my dreams. It is very motivating and the background music is amazing. I remember hearing this song on a loop when the days are tough and I am not able to do anything. Because it is on these days that I can fully relate with this song.
Most of the people hear to it, most probably the ones who are bothered about something or are trying hard to achieve something in their lives. It is that powerful, that strong, that you can actually feel powered hearing it.
雅思口语|Part1: Music 音乐
1 stay highly focus 高度集中
When the workload is too heavy that requires me to stay highly focus, music is a huge distractor. 工作任务重的时候我需要告诉集中。音乐会让我很分心。
2 instrumental music 纯音乐
Unlike many people who likes listening to instrumental music because it highly benefits for their concentration and study, in my case the music makes me feel instantly sleepy. 不像其他人一样,他们喜欢听纯音乐,因为他们能够集中注意力。而对我来说纯音乐只会让我犯困。
3 cheerful music 欢快的音乐
I usually listen to cheerful music when I need motivation while sad music is my go-to choice during emotional days. 我通常在需要激励的时候,喜欢听欢快的音乐;在情绪化的时候,悲伤的音乐是我的首选。
4 music taste 音乐品味
My music taste varied widely from West to East and
from the 1990s to modern time. 我喜欢的音乐种类比较多,从西方到东方,从上世纪九十年代到现在。
5 passionate 热情的,激昂的
The more I know about Korean pop, the more passionate I've become. 韩国的流行歌我听得越多,就会变得越有热情。
6 fluctuate 波动
As the music changes, my mood also fluctuates. 当音乐改变的时候,我的心情也在波动。
雅思口语Part 2范文模板:一首怀旧老歌
Describe a song that reminds you of a particular stage in life
You should say:
what is it about
who is the singer of this song
when you first heard it
and explain why this song has a special meaning to you.
1.适用考生:全适用
2.主题:晚安曲
3. 故事 线:我妈妈经常给我唱一首催眠曲,我小时候听过这么多次,至今记忆犹新。这首歌通常在我国农村地区很有名,母亲经常用它来安抚婴儿并让他们入睡。
雅思口语高分范文示例:
My mother often sang me a lullaby titled "Oh my sweet angel look the Moon has come to play with you…” in my bedtime and I have heard it so many times in my childhood that I can still remember it very vividly. This was a song usually famous in the rural area of our country that mothers often use to soothe the baby and to send them to sleep. It was an 8-10 lines song with great harmony and the way my mother sand it was extraordinary. It still echoes in my head and I miss those days.
I can remember my mother often sand this song till I got admitted in the school and I heard it from my father as well in my bedtime. I was pretty touched by the lyrics and in my childhood, I often imagined that the verses used in this song were true and would happen to me as well.
We often remember things from childhood especially the stories or songs we hear with great enthusia*. This song was no exceptions. I heard it hundreds of times and as a child I fanaticized those things to be true. Thais is the main reason I still remember it. Maybe, someday when I will become a father/ mother, I will sing thins song to my children as well. This has in fact become a permanent memory and I still love the great and calming piece of music.
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