雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核,综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力,实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说,也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了雅思口语人地事物范文 雅思口语中比喻的定义和方式,希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题,敬请关注。
在 雅思 写作考试中,很多考生使用过多的口语化表达词句,其实这对我们的 作文 来说并不友好,要知道中方和西方的 思维方式 是不同的。那么雅思写作如何避免口语化表达呢?接下来我为大家分享一些 方法 ,希望能帮助大家克服这方面的问题。
雅思写作怎么避免口语化表达
一,请避免人的主语
口语中我们很习惯用“某个人做某件事”来构成基本句式,以至于 议论文 中有的考生依然写的是这样的 句子 :
More and more young students go abroad because they want to get better education and find a better job in the future. I think that they may have problems in study and also in life.
上例中第一句的主句和状语从句中都是以某个人开始的,第二句中主句和 宾语从句 也是以人做主语。虽然说这两个句子的WPS(每句中的词汇数)都超过10个,应该说不能算是写的特别初级的 简单句 ,如果句法和词汇没有问题还是很有希望达到6分的。但如果全篇都是这样的句式,整个 文章 就显得幼稚,类似于 记叙文 写作,绝对突破不了7分。
其实改法很简单:我们只要避免从“某个人”开始句子就可以了,也就是说用比较客观的就事论事的态度。如:避免“学生 出国 ”,只写“出国”;避免“他们想要…”,只写“想要…”。这样,上面的句子就可以写成:go abroad to get better education and find a better job in the future,不但很客观,而且把原来的主句和从句两部分精简处理成了一个动词 短语 。既可以做谓语动词加上原来的一个主语构成句子,也可以用 不定式 、动名词和 分词 处理为 非谓语动词 做主语、宾语或者状语,还可以以从句的形式处理。至于原来第一句中的主语young students可以用 介词短语 的形式插入不定式或者动名词短语中,而下面的句子里的评价部分的内容提上来做主句的谓语,组成一个新的句式。
另外,第二例句中的“have”,一般情况下主语都是某个人,而在写作中多为“ there be ”句型所代替,更加客观。所以上面的两个例句就可以合并成一句:
There may be problems in study and also in life for young students to go abroad in order to get better education and find a better job in the future.
这样合并不但客观而且精炼,每个单位句子所表达的内容自然就扩大,词汇密度也相应地增多,自然容易得高分,如果加上个别单词或短语的替换,就可以达到7分。但切记不可机械照搬 范文 中的长句,从雅思中国网的学员反馈情况看判为模板的文章最低分数降至4.5.
更进一步说,“have”和“there be”句型都可以简化成更简单的介词“with”结构,如以下所示:
On the table is a box. There is a cover beside it.
这两个小句子是小作文的 流程图 中经常要用到的具体描写事物的句型,凡是描写具有某种属性或者带有某种外部特征都可以用”with”结构表达,所以上述两句可以合并成:On the table is a box with a cover beside it.
除了一般的“某个人做某件事情”和“…have…”句型,常见的人化主语的句型还有很受考生偏爱的几个 情态动词 ,如can, may, should等。一般建议前两个改成It is likely /possible to do/ that….;后一个改成It is necessary/ imperative/ highly expected/ suggested that sth. be done.的句式,请看下面的例示:
We can go anywhere we like with our bicycle. →It is possible for us to go anywhere we like with our bicycle.
To curb global warming, our government should promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.→To curb global warming, it is imperative that our government promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.
归纳起来说,议论文中我们要积极避免“某个人”做主语,尽量用不定式、动名词或者一个从句做主语,谓语动词用评价性的动词充当,这样就可以由记叙文性质的“过程性句式”顺利转化成更符合议论文文风的客观评价性的句式。
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二,多使用被动句式
在比较正式的新闻、商务、法律等英语(论坛)文体中,被动句式因为其更突出客观性的宾语或者事实被广为使用。雅思的图表分析和议论文都是比较正式的文体,所以我们也应该注意多用被动句式。尤其是在以下两个方面:
1.主语不确定
Someone murdered the millionaire last night.→The millionaire was murdered last night.
2. 主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人
To improve the air quality, we should reduce the use of private cars. →To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.
Most people think that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.→It is widely believed that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.
被动句的用法不仅体现在主句中,在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到,如:
It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to control the software piracy. →It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to have the software piracy controlled.
I don’t expect that she returned. → She is not expected to have returned.
I am not sure whether the college graduates will find jobs in the financially difficult year. →I am not sure whether the college graduates will get employed in the financially difficult year.
但是因为汉语中本来是没有被动句式的,所以受汉化思维的影响很多考生不会想到这一点。这就要求我们对此要引起足够的重视,并且在平时多加练习以培养对其敏感度。
三,注意名词化句式表达
写作中把原本用动词或者形容词表达的地方换成名词叫做名词化(nominalization)。名词化是为了避免太多动词造成的句法处理上的困难,同时也可以把某些陈述型的句式转化成更客观的评价句,更符合议论文的文体要求。如:
Our monitor didn’t come today. He has got a flu.
很明显这两个小句可以用 因果关系 的信号词连成一句:Because our monitor has a flu, he didn’t come today.,但这个because引导的 原因状语从句 以及 其它 的状语从句是考生们很常用的 复合句 ,虽然看似比较复杂,其实仍然是某个人做主语。如果非谓语动词掌握得好,可能我们会想到用Having a flu, our monitor didn’t come today.如果我们把前后两部分分别用一个概括性的名词来替代,中间加上我们熟悉的表示因果关系的动词,这个句子就非常符合议论文的风格:The flu caused the absence of our monitor today.或者The absence of our monitor is because of his illness.至少我们可以尽量将其中的一个小句变成名词,减少某个人做主语的口语化句式的出现频率。
虽然这种表达方法更为客观,句式上更加简洁,但是用比较抽象的概括性词汇来写句子对于越来越趋于低龄化的考生来说的确是个挑战。但是有一些单词是我们在写作中几乎必须要用到的,平时要备好以下几个常见的名词化:lack of(if there is no…), ignorance of (don’t know …), illiteracy in(can’t read…/ can’t use…), failure (didn’t do…)等。而且在具体的使用过程中可以结合介词with使用,使得句法更加凝练。此外个别单词也可以利用题目中的动词的名词性后缀如: -tion,-ment, -isation, -ness, -ity等或者变成动名词形式-ing。如:
More younger generations celebrate the western festivals→the celebration of the western festivals by more younger generations
四,避免其他口语化表达
如more and more/ a lot等口语化的短语尽量避免,可以用increasing(ly), a large number of…/a great deal of…./swarms of…等代替。此外缩略形式也是正式的写作中要避免的。
雅思写作真题荟萃1
Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons
It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and examples in your answer.
Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Some people pay money for the things they want or need. Other people trade products or goods for what they need. Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things. Which way do you prefer? Explain why.
Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
You want to persuade someone to study your native language.What reasons would you give?Support your answer with specific details.
You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park that you have visited. This might be a city park.a regional park,or a national park.What improvements would you make?Why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendations.
雅思写作真题荟萃2
辨证客观思维题:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should read only those books that are about real events,real people, and established facts.Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
熟知问题:Films can tell us a lot about the country in which they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?Use specific examples and details to support your response.
学校 教育 问题:Some people say that phyical exercise should be a required part of every school day.Other people believe that students should spend the whole day on academic studies.Which opinion do you agree with?Give reasons to support your answer.
常见选择性题:Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone.Others like to be with friends most of the time.Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?Give reasons to support your answer.
西方关注变化题:If you could invent something new.what product would you develop?Use specific details to explain why this invention in needed.
常见比较题:It has been said."Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.In your opinion,which source is more important?why?9、6辨证客观性思维题:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
G类学生问为何不分开了,其实TASK2是一样的常见的比较性题目
Because of developments in communication and transportation,countries are becoming more and more alike.How is your country becoming more similar to other places in the world?Use specific examples and details support your answer.
西方人关注的“变化”题If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific example to support your answer.
关于学校和教育的话题--People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons(for example,new experiences,career preparation, increased knowledge).why do you think people attend colleges?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
熟知问题篇--In general. people are living longer now.Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and detail to develop your essay.
雅思写作真题荟萃3
A类:Over past 50 years, young people gain status and power but old people have lost. What is the cause and is it a good development or bad development?
G类:Task 1:You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English-speaking country,You are not satisfied because there are something wrong with the furniture. So write a letter to the landlord andask how to resole the problem.
Task 2:Young people are exposed to a great amount of information such as film, book, Internet.In what ways they give bad influence on young people and explain the reason, how to reduce the bad influence with examples.
A类:Strong tradition对一个nation有civilize的作用do you think government should subsidizes the musicians, artists, actors or drama companies, do u agree or disagree, what should government do?
G类:People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of leisure time? Give your opinion using some of your own experience.
A类:Some people believe that a country should have the moral obligation to help the other country and some of the people think that exist the misspending of the government and the aid money can not be got by the poor. What is your opinion?
G类:Some people think that children’s lives will be different from their own. Whit is your opinion? Explain the reasons by your experience and examples.
A类:Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society, therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?
G类:Today some person has to work away from his family, what is the advantages and disadvantages? Give your opinion and some explains of your experience.
A类:Someone say the age of book is past, the info will be presented by some multimedia tools such as video, computer, television and film , others think the book and the written words will be necessary for spread info & complete education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
G类:The culture of different countries are becoming similar so there is no pint for people to go traveling abroad for they could have same experience at home agree or disagree.
A类:有些人把动物当作宠物有些人则当作食物和衣服的资源你觉的呢请从以上两个方面讨论并写出自己的观点
G类:居住在城市里的和居住在农村里的人的性格有什么影响举例说明Your character is strongly influenced by the placeswheresyou grew up.–In what ways can growing up in a city or growing up in the countryside influenced people’s character? Give you relative experiences.
A类:现在很多国家的学校都分男校和女校谈一下它的优缺点
G类:有人认为National Costumes有助于保持传统故认为人们要每天穿着National Costumes. Agree? Explain. In many countries, people don’t wear their national costume. Many people think it will forget their history and tradition. So, people should be encouraged to wear national costume every day. You agree or disagree. (This is argument topic, u should support one or another)
A类:More and more women go out to work. It is responsibility of government to provide staff and facilities for children of working mother, free of charge. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
G类:现在的食物和cooking都在改变请说明传统食物改变原因和看法结合所在地方的情况举例子
A类:现在很多国家的学校存在很严重的问题是由于学生的态度引起的这些问题是怎样形成的你有什么建议来改变这种情况In many countries schools have several problems of students behavior, Please give some cause of it and some suggest.
G类:一些人认为母亲不能同时出去工作和成为一个好母亲所以*应该付给母亲工资让她们好好在家带孩子你的观点用你的例子和你的 经验 说明
A类:英国和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害The spread of English and development of the international touri* have some negative effects to the country’s language andculture development? What extent do you agree or disagree?
G类:有人喜欢从事高风险运动如登山等人们说不值得让救援人员冒生命危险去救他们应对生命负责对吗说自己的观点举例
A类:体育专业是否应该拿钱比其它重要的专业多,两方面讨论,还要举例子Successful sports professionals earn a great deal much more than people in other important professions describe two views and your opinion.
G类:关于VIOLIANTFILMS你有什么看法对人有什么影响根据你的经验 说说 ?
A类:写某篇研究报道发现NOUNG WOMEN的犯罪率在升高,请给出一些POSSIBLE的理由和办法The rate of young women crimes is rising in the current society. What are the causes and how to solve it?
G类:Parent should limit children time of watching TV and playing computer game, others Insister children spend reading books, agree or disagree?
A类:Traveling abroad work for period of months or years, advandges or disadvandges to people and country
G类:Do you think poeple do different jobs they should have different time holidayare you agree or disagree , give your reason an explain.
1.雅思口语中比喻的定义和方式
比喻作为一种修辞方式 (figure of speech),其实也是认知的一种基本方式,在汉语中也是非常常见和常用的。我们常通俗地叫它作打比方,根据思想对象同另外为人熟悉的事物之间的相似或相同之处,用另外的事物来比拟思想对象,以达到通过熟知的事物特征来重新认识思想对象的目的。由此可见,它是一种具有化抽象为具体,变深奥为浅显的神奇力量的修辞,如果能在雅思口语考试中很好地加以运用,一定会有事半功倍的效果。
2、比喻的方式
由上面的定义可以看出,在思想的对象之外可以寻找到与之有类似点、为人熟悉的事物,就可以构成比喻。两类事物必须具有不同的性质,但却又要有相似点。我们知道在汉语中,比喻在文辞上有三个成分:本体、喻体和比喻词。其实,英语中的比喻也是一样,具体的讲就是有被比喻的事物、用来打比方的事物和表示比喻关系的词。根据三者同时出现与否或出现方式的异同,比喻的方式会有所不同。
3、Simile 明喻
It is a figure of speech which makes a comparison between two unlike elements having at least one quality or characteristic in common. To make the comparison, words like as, as...as, as if and like are used to transfer the quality we associate with one to the other。
很明显,在明喻中上述的三个成分都会出现,表示比喻关系的词通常为”as, as…as, as if, like”等,汉语中我们解释为“好像、似乎、仿佛”等喻词。
2.雅思口语范文之媒体报道名人
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Should famous people have more privacy? Does the media treat celebrities fairly?You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Being famous is not as easy as you think. Newspapers, television and the Internet can make you very well-known, but they can also take away your privacy. This essay will discuss whether celebrities are treated fairly by the media.
Famous people depend on the media. Without films, television, magazines, radio, and other media, there would be no money for actors or musicians, and politicians would not get elected. Without advertisements, Beckham would not get huge contracts. However, in return for publicity and even more fame and money, celebrities sell part of their personal and professional lives. Often, their friends and families suffer too.
The media, in turn, depends on celebrity. Sports heroes, super models, and politicians fill the pages of our papers and our television screens. But the relationship can easily go wrong. Too much attention from the media can drive some celebrities crazy. The families are affected, and relationships break down. Their work or social life suffers, leading to even more rumors and media stories. Like a pack of wild dogs, the press feeds on its victims and fights over the bones. Sometimes, the media has a duty to do. It must tell the public about some wrongdoing or some crooked business deal. But usually the main business of the media is to sell more magazines or advertisements, and when it has chewed up one victim, the pack will move on to the next.
In conclusion, there is a constant battle between media and celebrities, and often there are human victims. The next time you read about the latest footballer or singer, think about the human behind the story.
3.如何克服雅思口语中文思维
准确使用俚语其实也可以大大克服一些中文思维。比方说很多同学张口就来 “as strong as an ox.” 但是在英语里面通常的同意表达是 “as strong as a horse.”故而加大对西方文化的了解,恰当准确地使用俚语是也有效避免中文思维的有效途径。
再者是从语篇的结构来说。中文喜欢把最重要的东西放在段落甚至整篇文章的后面说,意在点睛,这样造成的一个很大风险就是在雅思口语题的卡片题部分,考生很有可能没有点睛就到了两分钟的大限,导致最后的结果是考官听你说了这么长时间还不知道你最终要说个什么道理,这样就直接影响考生在 “coherence”上的得分。英文表达更多的情况是要求开门见山,所以在考试的时候,做到直奔主题更符合西方的思维习惯,也更符合考试时有时间限制这样一个特殊的场合,以效避免上述风险。
扎实理解和掌握基本词汇,加深对英语国家语言背后的文化的了解以帮助准确使用俗语俚语,以及熟练基本句式和选择那种开门见山的表达是克服中式思维的重要步骤。
4.雅思口语答题时如何做到准确切题
其实雅思口语考试不是仅仅考察学生的语音,语调和流利度,而是考核考生整体的交流技能。而这个交流技能在考试过程中是从具体的测试方向进行衡量的,衡量方向包括口语词汇数量的大小,说话的时候是不是有逻辑,句法掌控的怎样,句型变化的情况,句子之间的衔接,以及对习语的应用等等。有的学生觉得这么多条条框框考试的时间又那么短,不可能都记得清清楚楚的。这里考生最需要注重的一个问题就是,考试的时候回答问题一定要切题。
其实雅思口语和作文很相似,口语中对给出的话题一定要切入主题,不然就会被考官认为是跑题。但是前提条件是一定要把题目听明白了才行。对于跑题的概念我们来举出具体的例子说明;
问题:Do you like reading books? 很多考生回答:Yes, I do. I like reading books very much。
对于这个答案,很多学生都认为老师问的问题太简单了,我只能这么回答。而很多老师对于这个答案也耳熟了。老师提醒各位考生的是,这个回答不算跑题,但是太过于简单了。想拿高分的考生不能老师一问Do you....。然后你就回答Yes, I do....。这样的话。感觉像是在背课文。可以用Of course, Definitely, Sure, 和Certainly来做个替换,然后把后面I like的宾语提前说出来,就变成了Reading books is one of my favourites in my free time. And it can enlarge my imagination and widen the scope of knowledge。这样回答既能保证不太俗套,内容也比较充实。对于口语第一部分的问题,建议考生不要回答的内容过多。只要切题,答出要点就可以了。如果考官让你谈谈你的家乡,首先要归纳重点要说的内容,然后把其中的一个扩展就行。不要没完没了的说很多,老师还会认为你是背诵出来的呢。
5.雅思口语高分句型
①(名词或代词) is the kind of (person/place/thing…) who (which/that) is…
②(名词或代词) is a (person/ place…) who (which) gives you the impression of being…
③(名词或代词)is one of the most (形容词) (名词) I have ever seen/met/known.
④(地点名称) is a place where you can do sth.
⑤(时间名词) is a day (occasion/the time) when you do sth.
实例分析:
He is truly helpful. a. He is the kind of guy who is truly helpful.
b. He always gives others the impression of being someone who is truly helpful.
Suzhou is ancient but also modern. a. Suzhou is the kind of city which gives you the impression of being both ancient and modern.
b. Suzhou is a place where you can appreciate both the ancient culture and modern city lifestyle.
The film is interesting.a. This is one of the most interesting films I have ever seen.
b. This is the kind of movie which blows your mind.
The party is exciting. a. This is the most exciting party I have ever attended.
b. It’s a party that I will remember for the rest of my life.
On the weekend, I relax myself by reading.Weekends are the time when I relax myself by reading.
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