TV drama 雅思口语范文 雅思写作怎么避免口语化表达

在 雅思 写作考试中，很多考生使用过多的口语化表达词句，其实这对我们的 作文 来说并不友好，要知道中方和西方的 思维方式 是不同的。那么雅思写作如何避免口语化表达呢?接下来我为大家棚孝分享一些 方法 ，希望能帮助大家克服这方面的问题。

雅思写作怎么避免口语化表达

一，请避免人的主语

口语中我们很习惯用“某个人做某件事”来构成基本句式，以至于 议论文 中有的考生依然写的是这样的 句子 ：

More and more young students go abroad because they want to get better education and find a better job in the future. I think that they may have problems in study and also in life.

上例中第一句的主句和状语从句中都是以某个人开始的，第二句中主句和 宾语从句 也是以人做主语。虽然说这两个句子的WPS(每句中的词汇数)都超过10个，应该说不能算是写的特别初级的 简单句 ，如果句法和词汇没有问题还是很有希望达到6分的。但如果全篇都是这样的句式，整个 文章 就显得幼稚，类似于 记叙文 写作，绝对突破不了7分。

其实改法很简单：我们只要避免从“某个人”开始句子就可以了，也就是说用比较客观核返的就事论事的态度。如：避免“学生 出国 ”，只写“出国”;避免“他们想要…”，只写“想要…”。这样，上面的句子就可以写成：go abroad to get better education and find a better job in the future,不但很客观，而且把原来的主句和从句两部分精简处理成了一个动词 短语 。既可以做谓语动词加上原来的一个主语构成句子，也可以用 不定式 、动名词和 分词 处理为 非谓语动词 做主语、宾语或者状语，还可以以从句的形式处理。至于原来第一句中的主语young students可以用 介词短语 的形式插入不定式或者动名词短语中，而下面的句子里的评价部分的内容提上来做主句的谓语，组成一个新的句式。

另外，第二例句中的“have”，一般情况下主语都是某个人，而在写作中多为“ there be ”句改和饥型所代替，更加客观。所以上面的两个例句就可以合并成一句：

There may be problems in study and also in life for young students to go abroad in order to get better education and find a better job in the future.

这样合并不但客观而且精炼，每个单位句子所表达的内容自然就扩大，词汇密度也相应地增多，自然容易得高分，如果加上个别单词或短语的替换，就可以达到7分。但切记不可机械照搬 范文 中的长句，从雅思中国网的学员反馈情况看判为模板的文章最低分数降至4.5.

更进一步说，“have”和“there be”句型都可以简化成更简单的介词“with”结构，如以下所示：

On the table is a box. There is a cover beside it.

这两个小句子是小作文的 流程图 中经常要用到的具体描写事物的句型，凡是描写具有某种属性或者带有某种外部特征都可以用”with”结构表达，所以上述两句可以合并成：On the table is a box with a cover beside it.

除了一般的“某个人做某件事情”和“…have…”句型，常见的人化主语的句型还有很受考生偏爱的几个 情态动词 ，如can, may, should等。一般建议前两个改成It is likely /possible to do/ that….;后一个改成It is necessary/ imperative/ highly expected/ suggested that sth. be done.的句式，请看下面的例示：

We can go anywhere we like with our bicycle. →It is possible for us to go anywhere we like with our bicycle.

To curb global warming, our government should promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.→To curb global warming, it is imperative that our government promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.

归纳起来说，议论文中我们要积极避免“某个人”做主语，尽量用不定式、动名词或者一个从句做主语，谓语动词用评价性的动词充当，这样就可以由记叙文性质的“过程性句式”顺利转化成更符合议论文文风的客观评价性的句式。

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二，多使用被动句式

在比较正式的新闻、商务、法律等英语(论坛)文体中，被动句式因为其更突出客观性的宾语或者事实被广为使用。雅思的图表分析和议论文都是比较正式的文体，所以我们也应该注意多用被动句式。尤其是在以下两个方面：

1.主语不确定

Someone murdered the millionaire last night.→The millionaire was murdered last night.

2. 主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人

To improve the air quality, we should reduce the use of private cars. →To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.

Most people think that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.→It is widely believed that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.

被动句的用法不仅体现在主句中，在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到，如：

It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to control the software piracy. →It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to have the software piracy controlled.

I don’t expect that she returned. → She is not expected to have returned.

I am not sure whether the college graduates will find jobs in the financially difficult year. →I am not sure whether the college graduates will get employed in the financially difficult year.

但是因为汉语中本来是没有被动句式的，所以受汉化思维的影响很多考生不会想到这一点。这就要求我们对此要引起足够的重视，并且在平时多加练习以培养对其敏感度。

三，注意名词化句式表达

写作中把原本用动词或者形容词表达的地方换成名词叫做名词化(nominalization)。名词化是为了避免太多动词造成的句法处理上的困难，同时也可以把某些陈述型的句式转化成更客观的评价句，更符合议论文的文体要求。如：

Our monitor didn’t come today. He has got a flu.

很明显这两个小句可以用 因果关系 的信号词连成一句：Because our monitor has a flu, he didn’t come today.，但这个because引导的 原因状语从句 以及 其它 的状语从句是考生们很常用的 复合句 ，虽然看似比较复杂，其实仍然是某个人做主语。如果非谓语动词掌握得好，可能我们会想到用Having a flu, our monitor didn’t come today.如果我们把前后两部分分别用一个概括性的名词来替代，中间加上我们熟悉的表示因果关系的动词，这个句子就非常符合议论文的风格：The flu caused the absence of our monitor today.或者The absence of our monitor is because of his illness.至少我们可以尽量将其中的一个小句变成名词，减少某个人做主语的口语化句式的出现频率。

虽然这种表达方法更为客观，句式上更加简洁，但是用比较抽象的概括性词汇来写句子对于越来越趋于低龄化的考生来说的确是个挑战。但是有一些单词是我们在写作中几乎必须要用到的，平时要备好以下几个常见的名词化：lack of(if there is no…), ignorance of (don’t know …), illiteracy in(can’t read…/ can’t use…), failure (didn’t do…)等。而且在具体的使用过程中可以结合介词with使用，使得句法更加凝练。此外个别单词也可以利用题目中的动词的名词性后缀如： -tion，-ment, -isation, -ness, -ity等或者变成动名词形式-ing。如：

More younger generations celebrate the western festivals→the celebration of the western festivals by more younger generations

四，避免其他口语化表达

如more and more/ a lot等口语化的短语尽量避免，可以用increasing(ly)， a large number of…/a great deal of…./swarms of…等代替。此外缩略形式也是正式的写作中要避免的。

雅思写作真题荟萃1

Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons

It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and examples in your answer.

Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Some people pay money for the things they want or need. Other people trade products or goods for what they need. Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things. Which way do you prefer? Explain why.

Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.

Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You want to persuade someone to study your native language.What reasons would you give?Support your answer with specific details.

You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park that you have visited. This might be a city park.a regional park,or a national park.What improvements would you make?Why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendations.

雅思写作真题荟萃2

辨证客观思维题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should read only those books that are about real events,real people, and established facts.Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

熟知问题：Films can tell us a lot about the country in which they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?Use specific examples and details to support your response.

学校 教育 问题：Some people say that phyical exercise should be a required part of every school day.Other people believe that students should spend the whole day on academic studies.Which opinion do you agree with?Give reasons to support your answer.

常见选择性题：Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone.Others like to be with friends most of the time.Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?Give reasons to support your answer.

西方关注变化题：If you could invent something new.what product would you develop?Use specific details to explain why this invention in needed.

常见比较题：It has been said."Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.In your opinion,which source is more important?why?9、6辨证客观性思维题：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

G类学生问为何不分开了，其实TASK2是一样的常见的比较性题目

Because of developments in communication and transportation，countries are becoming more and more alike.How is your country becoming more similar to other places in the world?Use specific examples and details support your answer.

西方人关注的“变化”题If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific example to support your answer.

关于学校和教育的话题--People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons(for example,new experiences,career preparation, increased knowledge).why do you think people attend colleges?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

熟知问题篇--In general. people are living longer now.Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and detail to develop your essay.

雅思写作真题荟萃3

A类：Over past 50 years, young people gain status and power but old people have lost. What is the cause and is it a good development or bad development?

G类：Task 1:You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English-speaking country,You are not satisfied because there are something wrong with the furniture. So write a letter to the landlord andask how to resole the problem.

Task 2:Young people are exposed to a great amount of information such as film, book, Internet.In what ways they give bad influence on young people and explain the reason, how to reduce the bad influence with examples.

A类：Strong tradition对一个nation有civilize的作用do you think government should subsidizes the musicians, artists, actors or drama companies, do u agree or disagree, what should government do?

G类：People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of leisure time? Give your opinion using some of your own experience.

A类：Some people believe that a country should have the moral obligation to help the other country and some of the people think that exist the misspending of the government and the aid money can not be got by the poor. What is your opinion?

G类：Some people think that children’s lives will be different from their own. Whit is your opinion? Explain the reasons by your experience and examples.

A类：Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society, therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?

G类：Today some person has to work away from his family, what is the advantages and disadvantages? Give your opinion and some explains of your experience.

A类：Someone say the age of book is past, the info will be presented by some multimedia tools such as video, computer, television and film , others think the book and the written words will be necessary for spread info & complete education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

G类：The culture of different countries are becoming similar so there is no pint for people to go traveling abroad for they could have same experience at home agree or disagree.

A类：有些人把动物当作宠物有些人则当作食物和衣服的资源你觉的呢请从以上两个方面讨论并写出自己的观点

G类：居住在城市里的和居住在农村里的人的性格有什么影响举例说明Your character is strongly influenced by the placeswheresyou grew up.–In what ways can growing up in a city or growing up in the countryside influenced people’s character? Give you relative experiences.

A类：现在很多国家的学校都分男校和女校谈一下它的优缺点

G类：有人认为National Costumes有助于保持传统故认为人们要每天穿着National Costumes. Agree? Explain. In many countries, people don’t wear their national costume. Many people think it will forget their history and tradition. So, people should be encouraged to wear national costume every day. You agree or disagree. (This is argument topic, u should support one or another)

A类：More and more women go out to work. It is responsibility of government to provide staff and facilities for children of working mother, free of charge. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

G类：现在的食物和cooking都在改变请说明传统食物改变原因和看法结合所在地方的情况举例子

A类：现在很多国家的学校存在很严重的问题是由于学生的态度引起的这些问题是怎样形成的你有什么建议来改变这种情况In many countries schools have several problems of students behavior, Please give some cause of it and some suggest.

G类：一些人认为母亲不能同时出去工作和成为一个好母亲所以*应该付给母亲工资让她们好好在家带孩子你的观点用你的例子和你的 经验 说明

A类：英国和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害The spread of English and development of the international touri* have some negative effects to the country’s language andculture development? What extent do you agree or disagree?

G类：有人喜欢从事高风险运动如登山等人们说不值得让救援人员冒生命危险去救他们应对生命负责对吗说自己的观点举例

A类：体育专业是否应该拿钱比其它重要的专业多，两方面讨论，还要举例子Successful sports professionals earn a great deal much more than people in other important professions describe two views and your opinion.

G类：关于VIOLIANTFILMS你有什么看法对人有什么影响根据你的经验 说说 ?

A类：写某篇研究报道发现NOUNG WOMEN的犯罪率在升高，请给出一些POSSIBLE的理由和办法The rate of young women crimes is rising in the current society. What are the causes and how to solve it?

G类：Parent should limit children time of watching TV and playing computer game, others Insister children spend reading books, agree or disagree?

A类：Traveling abroad work for period of months or years, advandges or disadvandges to people and country

G类：Do you think poeple do different jobs they should have different time holidayare you agree or disagree , give your reason an explain.

本文来自雅思口语网liuxue86.com《2009年雅思第一季度口试酷评》。 2009年的春天，南方阴雨绵绵，北方瑞雪丰年，考生不断冲向雅思考场的*也如雪雨不断。第一季度是个考官*燃烧的岁月，因为题目创新求变，目前已有不少难题、怪题、新题将考生湮没，当然也有考生翻船在老题重考的阴沟里。但整个数量上，前三种题型远超第四种题目。今季如果考生无法跟上考官的步伐，考生将极可能遇到2009年“迟来的冬天”(犹如经济危机迟来的泡沫般，连锁反应的速度远超过你的想象)。

一、 新题

1. Cooking

(描述一个烧菜有绝活的人，你为什么说他有这绝活？)

2. A piece of good news received from the phone call

(讲个婚讯、成功案例)

3. A traffic jam

(第二部分描返雹袜述一次在交通堵塞中的经历，发生了什么？你是怎么做的？讲故事题。考生应该注意重点谈你经历了什么思想、情绪和行为过程，促使最后产生什么结局？这才是经历题的重点。)

4. An interesting speech

(一个合格的讲座有很多条件，比如应该pursue after the good, the true and the beautiful, 演讲人必须有好的personality，内容应该advance with times，结尾应该inspiring。你是不是这样的interesting speaker呢？如果你是，你就可以从各方面说说了。)

5. A childhood song/melody

(小的时候我们唱过Two Tigers，the Black Cat Sergeant，现在它们已漏激经成为我们童年难得的回忆，这种题目，没有专业词汇，重在说情，而非道理。)

6. Favorite part of your hometown

(涉及城市中景点词语，考生要提前收集)

7. Phone/short message

(新题喔，去年都没有的，第二部分的题喔，描述一通*，或者一条短消息。你其实可以简单地谈谈内容，然后大谈你的感受，中国考生普遍最擅长讲感受，在读书的时候，不会谈感受就不能毕业的。所以，这种题目，也就是经历题的一种，不用什么专业语汇，重在讲故事，谈感受。考生要会识别变种啊~~~)

8. Handwriting

(第一部分狂考。说手写和computer有什么不同？)

9. Pollution

(第二部分卡片，描述一个有污染的城市。一般以大城市为重点对象。一般以空气污染、水污染为主要描述对象。比如汽车排放尾气Cars discharge exhaust gases的问题，水质不清the water quality is not very high的问题。)

10. Something that can help you to learn English

(21世纪什么最重要？和谐！什么东西能高级地带来和谐？终端分析机。什么能帮忙学英语？字典呗！什么东西高级点学英语？电子字典、*字典呗！)

11. Economic recession/financial crisis

(新题。二月开始有的。经济危机题的数量不大。关键就是要注意第三部分说到What should the Chinese government do to deal with the financial crisis over the world? What can the Chinese government do to cooperate with other countries to tackle this problem?中国*可以做很多，主要是不搞trade protectioni*贸易保护主义，实施清迈倡议carry out the Chiang Mai Initiative等，中国考生应该就这一块做足准备。)

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总评：新题中除了第6、9、11会涉及必要的专业术语，希望广大考生事先做好准备之外，其他的在应对方法上都以讲故事为主。雅思口试题现在越来越活，是因为考官开始让考生讲很多故事了，这样，考生就没办法靠死记硬背来准备考试了。而这也是考官的目的。可是我发现，如果考生能够形成一个故事材料套入这些题目中，以一挡十地做，会觉得这个准备过程能够带来更大的满足，因为没有了对专业术语的要求，其实这些题目准备起来似乎更方便了。

二、 难题

1. A private garden

(请注意喔，不是圆明园，也不是颐和园，更不是豫园，而是私家花园。你有没有私家花园？如果让你讲你会不会讲？)

2. A library

(图书馆会吗？图书馆会了，博物馆会不会吗？博物馆会了，艺术博物馆art gallery会不会吗？这种题目把它合并做不就结了嘛？)

3. A piece of law

(法律题去年年底就小荷才露尖尖角。毒奶事件已经爆发，震惊全国乃至全世界。老外可能认为中国人法律意识不强，法律题即刻冒尖。这是一个无奈，因为考生头一遭遇到这题目的，终于知道了传说中的江湖绝招“一剑封喉”的滋味。这种题目，不能硬来，只能绘声绘影。)

4. A performance or drama or acting or dancing

(很多中国考生不知道，这道题目属于变种，属于什么变种呢？哎，说穿了太简单了，无非就是TV program, movie的变种。懂了吗？其实不就是换一种表现形式吗？演员是谁？在哪里表演的？是学校某个食堂里呢还是中国国家大剧院？何必那么烦神？)

5. A change you want to make in your life

(还是讲故事。新年以来考官就开始超喜欢听故事。描述你的一个成功的经历an experience of success，人生中最好的一段the best stage in your life，一个快乐的家庭事件a happy family event，一场婚礼a wedding，很多……其实这些都能写，比如，婚礼，你说呢？关键是，你有没有这样一个美好的替代型故事。)

6. A piece of big news of 2008

(这道题有时间性。到了2009年四月应该就会慢慢淡去，可是为什么还要再写在这里呢？因为这道题可以和2合并啊，不相信吗？可以说，有人打*告诉你神七升天了。2008年的主要喜讯有这两条，神七升天China’s first space walk mission, Shen Zhou VII blastoff successfully, 奥运会 the 2008 Summer Beijing Olympic Games)

7. Success

(述说老百姓自己成功的故事。)

8. The best stage in your life

(人生中最好的阶段。第二部分卡片题。讲故事。)

总评：难题之所以难，是因为考生不熟悉话题。因此，1、建议大家收集花园里面相应的词汇，比如花和树的。2、建议大家参考图书馆网上介绍选取相应的表达。3、建议大家准备法律名称，并套用用法律来保护自己权益的故事。4、建议大家套Beijing Opera的表演。但是如果觉得太难，可以套故事说自己的表演。5、得事先准备。只要是人生中的希望，hopes and expectations，都可以讲作是人生中希望的变化。6、查找新闻。7、8可以和5结合起来。

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三、 怪题

1. Swimming

(形容一个游泳的地方。这道题使很多同学迷茫，因为大家会担心是不是没这么简单。其实这个题讲swimming pool就可以了。)

2. A big organization

(什么叫organization？很多考生不懂。其实organization很简单，很多东西都是organization，比如 companies, agents, corporations, charitable organizations都叫慈善机构了，考生知道四川地震吧？马上可以来一个，the Red Cross has many branches around China. In Wen Chuan Earthquake in Sichuan Province… 很多可以说的啊。)

3. An educational visit

(第一季度先遣部队。到后期数量大减，疲态尽显。该题是第二部分主打，请描述一个有教育意义的参观旅程。一般都是老师带去博物馆，美术馆，看到什么？有什么意义？可以结合博物馆这种题目。)

4. Visitor

(第一季度前期考得很火。目前有点后劲不足。故事题，男女朋友登门、朋友登门……太容易啦。)

5. Virtual art

(偏题。1月17、18这次开始考的，但后来几乎不再出现。蛮难的。因为很多考生概念不懂。其实也不能算太难。因为对于中国考生而言，最容易得就是说computer games！其实就是非真实的、被创造出来的不用真实材料的艺术，我的想法。)

总评：怪题目前有五道值得注意。怪题要调整思路做，要会发现怪题背后的老题，这才是最重要的。怪题可以和很多经典老题结合起来做。比如1可以和 hotel, 有水的地方结合。2可以和company结合。3可以和博物馆结合。4可以和friend结合。5可以和computer game结合。

四、 老题重考

1. Radio

(第三部分常见，收音机的最大对头就是电视机TV，对它们的比较也总是雅思口试历史遗留问题。)

2. Bicycle

(第一部分，说说自行车的环保environmentally friendly，eco-friendly，讲讲其他交通工具means of transportation的差劲。)

3. A course you would like to study

(一个你想要学习的课程。我们有很多想要学习的课程，但有更多正在学的课程。它们是不错的选择。)

4. A healthy activity/habit/lifestyle

(这是2009年非常大的关注热点。考官非常关心中国人群的生活质量。所以，就会问到，比如：Which should be responsible for the health of the people, the individual or the government? 剑六开始就有道类似的题。到近期一直在考第二部分描述一种健康的生活方式，活动，比如practice yoga, go jogging，现在白领的健身房文化go to the fitness center提供了很多的选择。)

5. Communication

(第三部分常考。问道媒体沟通一类的问题。比如三宗“最”email, chatting tools, letter之间永远的纠缠。)

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6. Website

(网站题是一道重要的媒体题。媒体题要学会举一反三。一个网站的内容可以是一本书、一本杂志、一张报纸、甚至是一座雕塑——如果考生思路够开阔的话。关键是怎么引入。)

7. Sports facility/sports activity/children’s game

8. A kind of clothing that Chinese people wear in festivals or on holidays

(建议可以说说唐装。女装cheongsam或者Qi Pao，男装Chinese jacket, sun yat sen's uniform)

9. Neighbor

(第二部分考得少了。倒是第三部分狂考。主要是Do you like to communicate with your neighbours? What do you usually talk with your neighbours? Is it important to communicate with your neighbours? 中国人这方面目前做的是不是少了？)

10. A painting/art gallery/sculpture

11. Historical place

(建议看景点介绍。)

总评：老题就不多说了，考生应该有一定的思路。就是要引起重视。

本文对第一季度一共34个话题作了评论，但是不包括次数相对比较少的话题，不过能够把这些难的、怪、新、经典的话题搞好，相信广大考生已经能基本战胜自己，也就能战胜考试。祝好。

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