环保作文雅思口语范文大全【雅思作文批改判厅】5分：过于口语化，注意语法

更新：2023年07月20日 22:46 雅思无忧

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了环保作文雅思口语范文大全【雅思作文批改判厅】5分：过于口语化，注意语法，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。
环保作文雅思口语范文大全
【雅思作文批改判厅】5分：过于口语化，注意语法

雅思口语作文accommodation

您好!下面为您整理了关于雅思口冲厅语常见话题：Accommodation，以下是详细内瞎判散容：

Accommodation

1、Can you describe the place where you live?

2、What do you usually do in yourhouse/flat/room?

3、Are the transport facilities to your home verygood?

4、Please describe the room you live in.

5、Is there anything you don't like about the place where you live?

6、What kind of decorations does it have?

7、How do you think this room could be improved?

8、What can you see when you look out the window of your room?

9、How well do you know your neighbors?

10、What kind of people are your neighbors?

11、Do you spend much time socializing with your neighbors in your
neighbors'磨氏 homes?

12、Do you like the environment where you live?

13、Would you say the place where you live is good for families with
children?

14、In the future, what type of place would you like to live in?

15、What kind of neighborhood/environment/surroundings would you like to
live in?

Important:

At the moment (2021) in China, there are about 30 different topics being
used in Part 1.

These topics and questions are in the examiner's question book(topic pool),
the examiner isnot allowed to make his or her own questions in Part 1 test.

谁能帮我预测一下9月26号的南昌雅思作文考题和口语...

1. Many people think the increasing trade and cultural contacts between countries as positive development. Others think these are leading to the loss of nation identities. Discuss both sides of the problem and give your own opinion.

2. Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

3. Do you think people do different jobs they should have different time holiday, are you agree or disagree, give your reason and explain.

4. In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

5. Television is still a relatively new invention, yet it has had profound effects on China and on Chinese's lives. Write about 250 words discussing the effects of television. You can write about the good effects, the bad effects, or both.

6. Advertising has harmful effect on young people, it should be strictly limited. Do you agree or not. Give your reason support your ideas.

7. The number of cars keeps increasing, road systems should be expanded. Some people think the government should pay for it. Some people think the car owners should pay for it. What is your opinion?

8. Some people say that governments should pay for the public health care and education, while others say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Please discuss both views and give your own opinion.

9. Some people think that a high salary is the most important feature of a job, other think job satisfaction or being useful for society more important. Discuss.

10. -[endif]-->Some say that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to boarding school. Others say that children had better live with their families and attend a day school. What do you think about it?

1. Everyone complains about taxes, yet think about what would happen if there were no longer an income tax. In a 250-word essay, discuss the positive effects of an income tax, the negative effects, or both.

2.More and more women go out to work. Is it the government’s responsibility to subsidize them and provide free staff and facilities to care for their children? To what extent do you agree or disagree to this idea?

3. With the fast pace of globalization, the whole world has become a global village with combination of different cultures. What are the reasons for losing a variety of languages and cultures? Think of some solution to alleviate the problem.

4.Computers are widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play any important roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?

5.Wild animals have no place in 21st century. Some people think that prevent these wild animals from dieing out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this./ Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment. Is it necessary to keep animals in zoos?

6. Although it is a freedom to use tobacco while some people think it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ What’s your opinion?

7. some people suggest when people move to a new country they should accept the new culture as their own. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

8．Nowadays parents like to give pocket money to their kids as a means of encouragement. Others think it has some negative aspects. What are the advantages and disadvantages of pocket money?

9.Some people say that people should have different amount of holiday according to their job. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?

10.Nowadays there are various methods to relieve the pressure in modern life. Some read or exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?

11.The gap of living in cities and the countryside is larger and larger. What are the reasons in your country and how to reduce the differences?

12.The private motor vehicle has greatly improved individual freedom of movement. Moreover, the automobile has become a status symbol. Yet the use of private motor vehicles has contributed to some of today's most serious problems. How can the use of private motor vehicles be reduced?

这是别人的预测.

*应该对铁路比公路花钱？这位同学整体架构比较完整，但是口语化比较严重，语法错误比较多，基础不够扎实，需多多练习。最终得分4.5-5分，还有很大的进步空间。

作早碰文题目:大作文：陆冲谈剑11Test1大作文

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

作文内容：

Traffic problem has disturbed government for a long term,as a lot of measure [b1] have been taken to solve that, [b2] there are still some problems remained,m[b3] any people say that government should spend more money on rail rather than road,but i can not[b4]totally agree with this opinion.

Railway, comparing [b5] with road,has larger capacity to load [b6] goods or people,and it is also a good choice for long-distance travel.One of the advantages of rail is that you will never meet a traffic light or jam on your way to the destiny[b7] .Government have invest [b8] a lot to make it more safe[b9]and convenient[b10] ,but sometimes it [b11] still makes trouble for people when it is at[b12]peak time;[b13] such as Spring Festival in China,there are even not enough tickets for those passengers who want to go home and [b14] they have to stay in the waiting room for a long time.So more basic facilities or more trains are needed to serve such a large number of people and increase the degree of comfort in passenger s [b15] journey.

On the contrast,road ,as another way that frequently used,is more flexible than railway,b[b16] ut things changed when traffic condition is poor,ad [b17] people nowadays spend a lot of time on traffic jam due to the increasing number of private cars,especially in those major cities.In order to figure this problem,government should invest to build more roads like [b18] overhead-roads to release the traffic stress ,so that the air quality[b19]in cities will improve a lot ,too.[b20]

Overall,fund [b21] are needed in both of areas,but it is not wise to say that more money should be used in rail or road,it must according [b22] to the circumstance.

[b1]measures
[b2]but
[b3]注意断句，Many
[b4]写作中是cannot
[b5]compared
[b6]transfer
[b7]destination
[b8]has invested
[b9]safer
[b10]more convenient
[b11]指谁？
[b12]改成during
[b13]符号不对
[b14]又是连接谁？
[b15]passengers
[b16]另起一句，大写
[b17]？
[b18]这是口语用词
[b19]和空气质量有关这个逻辑在哪里？
[b20]口语
[b21]funds
[b22]情态动词后用原形

各项细评：

针对问题最大的一点指出问题：

改这篇文章感觉像是改口语段子，因为口语化的说法很多，最大的问题是简单语法错误和复杂语法中句子的断句。句子可以写长，但长句也遵循语法规则，需要连词或者合适的代词。需要系统学习语法。
临考前建议整理一下论点思路，考场发挥尽量不要出大的语法错误就可以了。

附批改原图：

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雅思这个月13号的考试,告诉我点口语真题,就是最近在...

part 1

基本信息题

1 Name

What’s your full name?

What name do people at home call you?

Does your name have any special meaning?

Would you like to change your name?

Do Chinese people attach a lot of importance to names?

2 Hometown

What do you like about your hometown?

Did you learn much about the history about your hometown?

Has the weather in your hometown changed much in recent years?

What facilities does your hometown have?

3 Accommodation

Can you describe the place where you live?

Please describe the room you 握冲源live in.

Are the transport facilities near your home very good?

How well do you know your neighbors?

Would you say the place where you live is good for families with children?

4 Work/Study

Do you work or are you a student?

What is your favorite subject at school?

What is your future work plan?

What do you like about your work?

5 Shoe

What kind of shoes do you like?

Where do you shop for shoes?

Do you prefer comfortable shoes or pretty shoes?

6 Friend

Do you have many close friends?

What do you usually do with your friends?

How long have you known your best friend?

7 Food/Fruits

Do you think there are any benefits from eating breakfast?

What do you consider to be a healthy diet?

Are you willing to try some new food？

What’s your favorite fruit?

8 Laughing

When would people usually laugh?

Do you enjoy laughing?

Is laughing beneficial to health?

9 Handwriting

Do you prefer handwriting or typing?

Will handwriting be replaced by typing in the future?

10 Nature

Do you enjoy nature?

What could people do to protect our natural environment?

11 Camping

Do you like camping?

Have you ever had camping experience before?

Is camping very popular in your country?

技能类

12 Cars

Do you like cars?

Do you have a driver’s license?

If you wanted to buy a car, what kind 段态of car would you choose?

Do you like travelling by car?

13 Languages

What foreign languages 判局have you studied?

Do Chinese people have many opportunities to practice oral English?

What is the most difficult part about studying a foreign language?

14 Dictionary

Do you often use dictionary?

What kind of dictionary do you prefer to use?

What are the benefits of using dictionaries for kids?

15 Map

Do you use maps?

Do you think map is important?

Do you prefer to use electronic maps or those made of paper?

高频题（喜好，偏向类居多）

16 Noise

Are you often bothered by noise?

What natural sounds do you like the most?

What are some places where there is a lot of noise?

17 Street Market

Do you like visiting street market?

What is usually sold in these street markets？

Would you like to visit a street market in a foreign country?

Do people in your country prefer to shop at a street market or in normal malls?

18 Shopping

Do you like shopping?

Is there anything you don’t like about shopping?

Do you enjoy shopping alone or with others?

19 On-Line Shopping

Do you like shopping on line?

What are the benefits of shopping on line?

20 Housework

Do you usually do any housework?

Do you think it’s important for children to do some housework?

21 TV

What kind of TV program do you like to watch?

What kind of TV program is popular in China?

How do you feel about advertisements on TV?

22 Color

What’s your favorite color?

Do you usually wear clothes in your favorite color?

Do you think color is important in our daily life?

Are there any colors you dislike?

23 Concentration

Is it easy to concentrate on things?

How to make children concentrate on things?

24 Reading

Do you like reading?

Do you like reading in the morning or in the afternoon?

What kind of books do you like to read?

25 Cycling

Do you like riding bicycles?

Are bicycles very popular in China?

What are the benefits of riding bicycles?

26 Birthday

What do you usually do on your birthdays?

What do Chinese people usually do on their birthdays?

Is birthday still important to you?

27 Teachers

Do you like your teachers?

What do you think of your teachers?

When you were in school, did your teacher have an influence on you?

What qualities should a good teacher have?

28 Politeness

Is being polite very important?

Who taught you to be polite?

29 Time Management

Do you often wear a watch?

Is being on time important?

How do you feel when others are late?

30 Toy

What kind of toy did you like to play when you were little?

Are there any differences between the toys today and toys in the past?

Why are some *s still keeping their childhood toys?

写作

以上为04年1月至11月的雅思作文TASK1的题型出现的频率，由此可见，柱形图以及表格图出现的频率是最高的，均为17次；；而饼图、线图以及前几年并不常常出现的流程图并列第二，出现的次数为6次；地图以及混合图到目前为止出现的频率最低，只有4次

因此，从数量上来分析，已经遥遥领先的柱形图和表格图出现的机率可能降低，然而并列第二中的两种图形即饼图以及线图则在接下来一个多月的考试中很有可能再次出现，混合图以及地图出也需要考生好好准备，切勿掉以轻心。

TASK2

展示一下2021年主要出现频率，14年最后的几场考试中大作文考生们可以重点准备传媒类、文化和环境类的内容和语料，其次是社会和教育类。

建议准备如下题目：

1. We have a population with a mix of cultures and ethnics in a country. Why is this the case?And has this become a positive or negative development?（文化类）

2. Some people think we should invent a new language that can be used by people all over the world for international communication. Do you think its benefits would outweigh the problems?（文化类）

3. Some people believe that news media is influencing people’s lives and just brings negative effects today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（传媒类）

4. Newspapers have great influence on people’s opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phenomenon and *yze the positive and negative effects of the phenomenon.（传媒类）

5. Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（*类）

6. Some people think that individuals are not able improve the environment, only government and companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（*类）

7. In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. To what extent do you think its benefits outweigh the drawbacks? （社会现象类）

8. People nowadays are living in societies where consumer goods are relatively cheaper to buy. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? （社会现象类）

9. Recently, children are spending much time on TV instead of active and creative things, why do you think this is a case? What measures will be helpful to change this problem? （教育类/report）

10. Today, more and more students are choosing to move to other cities to have higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks? （教育类）

【雅思作文批改】5分:过于口语化注意语法

上海各雅思考点批改松紧程度(作文&口语),请将每个大...

上海一共三个考点（财经大学、华册罩东师范大学、对外经贸大学）。当然还有3月8号之后开始启用的应用技术学院（至今没人考过，这里不做评论）。
首先，雅思官方称评判标准在全世界任何地方是统一的。
但在我参加环球雅思的培训的过程中，多名老师推荐去上海对外经贸大学（在松江）才加考试。原因有下：①参考人数较少（因为在松江）导致学霸数量相对没有位于市中心的财大和华师大多，所以在写作评判中，你的文章被好文章形成鲜明反差的可能性小了很多。②口语考官上，相对财大和华师大的来说，他们比较年轻，大多是新招来做考官的，在口语评判上可能松点。③华师大与财大存在州行闹关于5分口语老太的传说。④"去松江考，口语一般能提高0.5“我课上口语老师的原话。

把各大学分开罗列的话就是
口语写作参考人数
华师大紧紧多（华师大听力考试耳机不能调音量，是固定的，这点很坑爹）
财大紧紧中
对外经贸较松较松少

另外关于报考哪场考试，给楼主一点建议
①别报名寒暑假的考试，那时候学霸都放假了，最好报名大学期末考试时段的那几场（过年前一个月或6月）。考霸相当重视自身的GPA，不常在这段时间参加雅思考试
②楼主应对充分考虑自身的地理位置，如果离松江太远，导致可能很早就要起来，影响考试状态，则不建议去松江考试。
③如果楼主认为只要能得到更高的分数，或者更松的批改度，路程什么的对带吵你来说都不是问题，甚至可以报名参加中国内地的雅思考试。这样口语及写作能更有优势

有问题可以再问我