雅思2021口语part3范文 雅思口语7分什么水平

一、雅思口语的训练方法：

1、丰富自己的词汇量和句型。这也是提高雅思口语的方法。雅思口语考试涉及上百个不同的口语话题，所包含内容之广可以说是骇人听闻的。

考生平时可以多看TV program、talk show、新闻节目和电影，大量进行单词和句型的记忆，并且在最短时间内进行口头练习，不仅是学习口语最快的方式，也是记忆单词、提高语感最佳的方式。

2、训练自己的语音语调。这是提高雅思口语的方法之一。举例来说，中国学生常见的发音问题中，常有th音不咬舌的状况。比如，think这个单词念出来后，感觉像sink。虽说汉语中并没有咬舌的声音，但雅思考官的训练中自然包含这方面的针对训练，会很注意学生在这方面的欠缺。

3、培养英式思维能力。准备好前面两个阶段的雅思考生平时尽量争取与外教面对面练习的机会，也应当大量参加英语的各类活动，如戏剧大赛、演讲大赛、电影沙龙等等，最大限度余陵拆地接触英文环境，激发英语思维意识和文化交际意识，以英式思维汪握渗透英语学习，才能更快地提高口语实力。

二、口语考试题型：

雅思考试通过考生与考官之间进行*交流的形式对考生的英语口语水平进行考察，是目前最接近真实生活场景的互动式测评。

所有的雅思考官会接受统一的培训与严格监控以确保其按照全球统一标准对考生进行评判，标准共分为四项，包括流利性与连贯性、词汇多样性、语法多样性及准确性、发音。每场考试都会全程录音以进行后期监测，保证口语考试的客观性和公平性。

扩展资料：

雅思口语训练的注意事项：

1、平时训练时要注意分点讨论：这里说的分点是分层次去表达，特别是第3部分的深入讨论部分。想要做到分层讨论，就需要考生具备一定的生活和社会常识性问题的了解，只有这样才能很好的避免没话可说的状况。

2、使用第一人称交流：考试的时候，考官最想听到的是你个人的独到见解，所以尽量说你的感受，就用主语“I”就足够了。但你自己只能代表你个人的观点，说到他人的想法的时候，要注意用词。

3、注意性别问题：对于中国考生来说，性别的用语还是要多注意，如果真的怕考试时把性别“he”或“she”说颠倒的话，那就把你准备的涉及到人物的资料，都尽量用“he”来表达就OK了。

4、做到尽早点题：考生能在前2句话里，做到很到位的点题，也就是平时说的中心句或者论点，这对于口语考试第2部分尤其重要。竖枣不要想给考官一点猜测的空间，所以还是诚恳点的好。

参考资料来源： 百度百科-雅思

参考资料来源： 百度百科-雅思口语

雅思复习资料——雅思词汇篇
首先雅思备考离不开基础的雅思词汇，市面上的词汇书五花八门，不过考生们还是要根据自己的实际情况选择词汇书，对于雅思基础不错的考生没必要购入基础词汇，而新手雅思考生英语水平还不够高的情况下选择挑战难度太大的词汇也并不需要。
目前比较实用的雅思书籍有王陆《807雅思词汇精讲》，张红岩《词以类记-雅思词汇》以及外研社的《剑桥雅思词汇精典—升级版》等。
雅思初级选手必背单词书
NO1.【雅思词汇词根+联想记忆法】文本PDF+听力MP3推荐理由：首先“词根+联想”的内容实用有趣，而且配有插图，让人加深记忆，其次燃颂册，里面涵盖雅思四大题型词汇，收词相当全面，突出重点单词，并且释义准确还有配上了真题例句，直接几种雅思考试要点，最后，书中用*标出听力、口语词汇，备考听说，有目的性的收录丰富的日常习语搭配，帮助大家突破口试难关。
NO2.【王陆807雅思词汇精讲】着重看写作篇
NO3.【雅思词汇胜经】这是是新东方一线老师自己编的，跟雅思考试的关系不言而喻，给出雅思考试备考词汇，是雅思考试的必备辅导用书。书中提供了6分雅思核心词汇及7分雅思高分词汇，有助于大家在短期内科学备考
NO4.【剑桥雅思真题核心词汇】所有单词源自真题，高频机经词汇重点解析，有的放矢，再现雅思真题场景，增强实战性，英文释义，训练英语思维，精编雅思题目，学练结合，考官录音，背单词练听力，一举两得。
雅思高分选手必背单词书
NO1.《IELTS9分必考词汇·培训类》+《IELTS9分必考词汇·学术类》
NO2.《80天攻克雅思核心词汇(第4版)》
NO3.《剑桥雅思词汇精典》

雅思复习资料——雅思听力篇
《listen to this2》，是外研社出的经久不衰的听力经典教材，对于英语听力基础较差的考生来说，是加强听力基础最好的雅思复习资料。
《雅思IELTS考试技能训练教程-听力》，假如你雅思复习的时间实在很有限，再从基础练习就不合适了，可以重点看看雅思的老牌经典书籍，也就是我们常说的北语出的黑眼睛，全称是。
《剑桥雅思真题4-13》，完全是考试真题，对考试帮助很大。雅思听力不同于其他几个部分，不仅需要词汇量，还需要对词汇的反应，以及拼写能力
雅思复习资料——雅思阅读篇
雅思阅读套题练习书籍
1.剑桥雅思真题系列4-13
雅思官方出品的资料，权威的考试真题，这个不用多说，必然是爆款，人手一套的。
适用人群：所有烤鸭的圣经，必看书籍
2.《9分达人雅思阅读真题还原及解析》
全书分为三个部分，第一部分包括七套雅思阅读真题，每套题共有三篇阅读文章;考生应对所有文章精读细读，达到完全理解的水平，因为每篇文章都有可能在考试中再次出现。
第二部分对本书收录的每套题目进皮宏行了详细的解析，不仅帮助考生彻底弄懂每套试题，同时也教给考生相应的解题方法和技巧。
第三部分为八套真题的参考答案，考生可进行自我检测。
适用人群：除了剑桥真题，没有别的阅读套题练习的烤鸭
3.《雅思阅读真经1,2,3》
从2004年到现在，这本书提供给你的不仅仅是真题还原，而是完整的训练方式，是一本让所有雅思考生感到信赖和骄傲樱搭的真经。被媒体誉为“国内英语考试类教材质量提升的标志”，代表了整个雅思培训行业对于真经教学研究的最高水平，代表了测试和训练的完美契合方式。
雅思阅读参考类书籍
NO1.《最新雅思阅读胜经——平行阅读法》
雅思平行阅读法的核心在于“多题并举，启迪阅读”,是对常规答题方法的重大突破。这种方法能够有效提高学生的阅读效率和准确率，它兼顾基础薄弱和有一定功底的考生，让考生在最短的时间内掌握最佳的雅思阅读考试技法。
适用人群：雅思零基础或者想要提高做题方法解题速度的烤鸭
NO2.《雅思机经题源大全:阅读科学分册》
以历年雅思真题为基础，以真题机经版本回顾为依据，从国外权威期刊、杂志及学术论文集锦中精选100篇文章，按照雅思阅读常考科学类话题进行分类整理，分为生物科学类、建筑科学类、医疗健康类、自然环境类、其他，共5个单元，再现原汁原味的国外原版材料，覆盖真实考试内容。
适用人群：名副其实的雅思阅读文章题库，想要了解更多雅思文章背景知识的烤鸭放心拿走
《雅思阅读高分突破：长难句破解密码》不仅适合备考雅思的考生，也适合备考其他相关英语考试(新托福、考研、四六级等)的考生。是目前市场上唯一一本专门介绍雅思阅读长难句分析的书籍，甚至也可能是唯一一本介绍英语阅读长难句分析的书。
适用人群：经常被雅思阅读长难句阻挡做题速度和烤鸭
由于雅思阅读素材就是取自于各大网站报刊杂志的新闻，所以务必要在业余时间扩大自己的知识面哦。

雅思复习资料——雅思写作篇
雅思写作市面上比较热门的就是《十天突破雅思写作》和《手把手教你雅思写作》。前者适合入门考生备考初期使用，后者适合在雅思写作备考练习阶段使用。
不过雅思写作资料除了书籍，考生们在对雅思作文有了一定的了解之后可以选择利用写作真题进行练习，书籍上的考试技巧，思路解析及高分词汇只能帮助考生做到熟悉题型，引导考生的写作思路。但最终考生还是要回归到写作练习中去。
剑雅真题后面的参考范文值得考生参考，建议考生们认真研读写作范文。
雅思复习资料——雅思口语篇
雅思口语资料不多，雅思口语主要靠练习，如果单纯从词汇和考试技巧来推荐考试资料，建议考生可以了解一下《王陆807雅思机经大全-妙语连珠》、《雅思考官口语实战指导》以及《雅思王真题口语速成》。
雅思口语题库对于很多考生来说是刚需，针对每年的1月、5月及9月雅思口语变题季，考生们可以在网上搜罗考生分享的雅思口语话题作为复习资料。

为了方便广族困粗大考生更好的复习， 新东方在线 雅思频道为大家准备了有关雅思考试 作文 话题：年轻人的内容，以供各位考生考试复习参考，希望对考生复习有所帮助。

雅思作文话题：年轻人

写作题目

Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目大致意思：到底年轻人(1)是应兆镇该遵守传统，(2)还是可以被允许有自由的行为?

隐形模板：起3承6转6合3

起--允许年轻人自由取舍传统，视传统为历史的导师，而不是未来的狱警。

承--(舍其劣)年轻人自由抗拒不好的传统束缚，如此社会才能进化。

转--(取其优)全力保卫尺橡优良的传统价值，如此相传社会的 文化 遗产。

合--年轻人在行为上分辨理性的活传统与非理性的死传统。

IELTS Example Essay

Every generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from the past. As individuals, young people are particularly keen to the need to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society. All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but not a jailer for the future.

Too often young men and women are enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for acting in conformity without thinking independently.

Accordingly, young people ought not to be forced to express their new feelings in a mummified form, otherwise the evolution in tradition could not happen. The point is that not just because something is traditional, so there is reason enough to do it. It is good, however, for young people to continue a worthwhile tradition, and it is also good not to be captive of an unreasonable tradition which is not worth having. Although social bondage persists, it makes a difference if young people are permitted to think and act in such a way as different from that of a conservative mind in which the word 'tradition' means a shortcut to thinking or an excuse for acting.

Probably a society can only successfully function with traditional values--diverse customs, thoughts, lifestyles, religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built on the past just as the past was built on the times that went before it. Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly lost through modernity.

Thus, it behooves young individuals to preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative influence from various factors such as industrialization, globalization, and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their country. Good tradition being a good guide, young people, however rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its enduring heritages and necessary evils.

In conclusion, since a modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed down for many generations, but should instead observe and *yze anything that agrees with reason and is conductive to the good and benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition, so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation to generation.

雅思大作文 范文 ：年轻人频繁换工作

2021年6月30日雅思写作大作文题目：An increasing number of people are changing their careers during their working time. What causes this trend and is it a positive or negative development for society?

6月30日的雅思大作文与本月7日的雅思大作文题目一样，主题都是年轻人频繁更换工作的原因及优劣势。这是一个大家都非常熟悉的话题，类似的话题曾经在2021年6月19日、2021年4月5日、2021年9月16日出现过。

在过去，更换一次工作是很难的，多数人都是在一个岗位上工作到退休，但现在刚 毕业 几年的年轻人如果没有换几次工作都会觉得自己吃亏了。那么，这到底是什么原因造成的呢?对于这种原因分析的题目，唐老师建议大家还是从三个层次(即物质层次、心理层次和社会层次)去思考，就容易把思路梳理得比较有条理。就年轻人更换工作而言

第一个理由肯定是为了挣取更高的工资，获得更好的发展机会;

其次，从心理上讲，很多年轻人愿意去尝试新工作，认为这样可以结识不同领域的朋友，增加人生体验;

最后，从社会角度看，由于 服务行业 的兴旺，电脑技术的发展，客观上也为年轻人频繁更换工作创造了可能性。

那么，频繁更换工作对年轻人来说是好还是坏呢?从好处上讲，这的确可以增加年轻人的 工作经历 ，从而提高他们未来在 就业市场 上的竞争力，但也有坏处，比如无法在某个领域成为最顶级的专家，从而失去更多发展机会。

本题审题时，要专注两个关键词，即“年轻人”和“频繁更换工作”。以下是本题高分范文。

开头：

Not long ago, most people would choose to stay on the same job for the entire life, but today young people prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another.

不久以前，大多数人都会选择终生从事同一份工作，但今天的年轻人更喜欢尝试不同的事情，从一份工作跳到另一份工作。

解析：

(1) 本段直接进入话题，用过去和现在的对比来提出下文讨论的现象：年轻人不停更换工作。

(2) stay on the same job 坚持做同一份工作

(3) hop from one job to another 从一份工作跳到另一份工作

主体：

In my view, there mainly are three reasons why young people are doing so. At the most basic level, young people find that frequent job changing can often bring them the pay rise they expect. My friend Edward is a perfect example. As a program designer, he has worked for three different companies in the past five years, and now he earns almost five times as much as he did in the first company. This would not have been possible if he had not been mobile enough. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, young people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred. Finally, changing jobs frequently nowadays has been made possible by the booming service industry and rapidly developing information technology and transport.

在我看来，年轻人之所以这样做，主要有三个原因。在最基本的层面上，年轻人发现频繁换工作往往会给他们带来期望的加薪。我的朋友爱德华就是个完美的例子。作为一名程序设计师，他在过去五年里为三家不同的公司工作过，现在他的收入几乎是第一家公司的五倍。如果他不是如此频繁地变动，那是不可能的。第二个原因是，通过做不同的工作或职业，年轻人可以增加他们的工作 经验 ，并最终变得更多才多艺。这可能会给他们一个竞争优势，特别是在当今的就业市场上，一个全面的员工总是被青睐的。最后，由于蓬勃发展的服务业和迅速发展的信息技术和运输，如今频繁更换工作已经成为可能。

解析

(1) 本段论述年轻人不停更换工作的三个原因，分别为物质原因(能挣更高工资，举例论证)、心理原因(增加工作经验+结果分析)，社会原因(服务业、信息技术和交通的发展)。

(2) at the most basic level 在最基本的层面上

(3) versatile 全能的

(4) give *. a competitive edge 给某人竞争优势

(5) booming 蓬勃发展的

主体：

Needless to say, job-hopping may be a bad thing if it is not well-considered. Shifting from job to job may prove to be a waste of time and opportunity since this may easily make a person Jack of all trades and master of none. As we know, the person who can provide the most professional service for the company enjoys the best opportunity of promotion. However, if a person does not find the job he is doing interesting or fulfilling, then his change job could be a win-win strategy both for the companies and employees. For the companies, “new bloods” often mean stronger labor force and vitality of the staff. For the employees, a new job means a new opportunity.

不用说，跳槽可能是一件坏事，如果没有没有好好考虑的话。从一份工作转到另一份工作可能是浪费时间和机会，因为这可能很容易使一个人成为万金油，但一无所专。我们知道，能够为公司提供最专业服务的人享有最佳的晋升机会。但是，如果一个人发现他所从事工作没有意义或没有成就感，那么他换工作对公司和员工来说都是双赢的策略。对公司来说，“新血液”通常意味着更强大的劳动力和活力。对员工来说，新的工作意味着新的机会。

解析

(1)本段讨论改换工作的坏处(无法专门做好一件事情)和好处(摆脱自己不喜欢的工作)。

(2)jack of all trades and master of none 什么都会但什么都不专的人

(3)fulfilling 有成就感的

结尾：

In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that no change of jobs is wasteful as long as it is carefully considered. Holding on to a job that we do not like is a crime against our precious life.

根据以上的讨论，我认为只要仔细考虑，换工作是不会浪费的。坚持一份我们不喜欢的工作是对我们宝贵生命的一种犯罪。

解析

(1)本段是结论，明确提出自己的观点。

(2)in light of 依据

(3)hold on to... 牢牢抱住;坚持

雅思大作文真题 | 年轻人适合在*担任要职吗?

雅思大作文题目

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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本周写作的话题是：年轻人是否适合在*担任要职?

有些人认为是可以的，有些人认为不可以，题目要求我们讨论双方观点，并给出你自己的观点。本题是2021年7月10日的原题再现(是不是太久远了?)，另外，2021年1月1日的考题(年轻人是否适合在机构担任领导?)也与本题非常接近。

年轻人是否适合在*担任要职呢?这个题目当然应该关注“年轻人”、“*”、“要职”这些关键词，应该讨论*要职有哪些要求，年轻人有哪些特点，这些特点是否适合他们在*中发挥作用，等等。注意我们在思维的时候不要过于复杂，要尽量简洁直接。比如*要职的要求，如果要复杂地思考那就要考虑很多东西了(比如管理能力，正直，处理人际关系，素质等等)。我们要从众多思维中选择与年轻人相关的东西来讨论。

担任*要职需要经验，这是年轻人缺乏的，因此年轻人不适合担任【反对】。

担任*要职需要改变精神，这是年轻人擅长的，因此年轻人适合担任【赞同】。

我的观点：有些*要职更注重经验，最好不要年轻人担任，但另一些要职更需要*，年轻人完全可以担任【一分为二的结论】。

老师笔记

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As we can see on television, the important positions in the government are often held by gray-haired menand women. While it is assumed by many that the elderly people are more experienced and capable, I would say that some important government positions should also be open to young people.

我们可以在电视上看到，*重要职位通常是由头发花白的男人和女人担任。虽然很多人认为，老年人更富有经验和能力，但我想说，*的一些重要职位也应开放给年轻人。

解析

(1)本段为引入段，提出现象和自己的观点。

(2) gray-haired man 头发花白的人

(3) assume 假设，认为

(4) capable 有能力的

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Undoubtedly, experience is of utmost importancefor many government positions. These positions have to deal with a great number of people every day and crisis may emergeany time. For example, a foreign affairs minister has to make quick responsesto the problems that may come from all over the world every minute. Without the rich experience collected from his long-time service in this field, it would be unlikely for him to fulfill his duties. Young people, therefore, are not really suitable for this type of government positions.

毫无疑问，对许多*职位来说，经验是最重要的。这些职位每天必须与大量的人打交道，危机随时可能出现。例如，外交部长必须对世界各地每分钟可能出现的问题迅速做出反应。没有他在这一领域长期服务所积累的丰富经验，他不可能履行他的职责。因此，年轻人真不太适合这种*职位。

解析

(1)本段论述某些*职位需要经验，不适合年轻人，用外交部来举例。

(2) of utmost importance 极其重要 (= extremely important)

(3) emerge 出现

(4) response 反应

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However, young people should be given the opportunity to hold those government positions which call formore passion than experience. Young people who are more open-minded and receptiveto new idea than the elderly, are more likely to solve problems in an innovative way, and to put theiroriginalideas into action, which may lead to unexpected benefits. As far as I understand, the national ministry of education as well as the primary schools and middle schools should be led by young people who are more inspiringand innovating.

然而，应该给年轻人机会担任那些需要更多*而非经验的*职位。年轻人比老年人更开放，更接受新想法，因此更有可能以创新的方式解决问题，并把自己新颖的想法付诸行动，这可能会带来意想不到的好处。在我看来，国家部 教育 以及中小学应该由更具启发性和创新性的年轻人来领导。

解析

(1)本段论述某些*职位(比如教育部和中小学)应该由年轻人来担任。

(2) call for 要求

(3) receptive 包容的

(4) innovative 革新的

(5) original 新颖的

(6) inspiring 启发性的

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It is, therefore, difficult to draw a general conclusion about whether young people should hold important government positions. For some positions which are more experience-based, the elderly people are more suitable candidates, yet for other positions which require more passionate spirit than experience, young people can perhaps do a better job than their elderly counterparts.

因此，很难对年轻人是否应该担任重要*职务做普遍结论。对于一些更基于经验的职位，老年人是更合适的人选，但对于其他需要更多的*而不是经验的职位，年轻人或许可以比他们的老年同行做得跟好。

解析

(1)本段提出自己的观点：有些职位需要老年人担任，有些职位需要年轻人担任。

(2) candidate 候选人

(3) ounterpart 相对应的人(物)

雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:年轻人问题

要求：

Young people who are still at school often feel just as much stress as working *s. What are some of the causes of this stress, and how does it affect individual students?

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雅思小作文范文解析：

地图描述的是十年之间一个博物馆的布局的变化，首先要注意的这个图中应该统一使用过去式，同时在描述的时候可以简单的分为三个部分进行描述：左侧，中部和右侧。按照巧带5段的结构进行描述比孝薯芦较不会混乱，同时要着重的突出变化的描述，使用相关的衔接词汇进行前后的对比。

雅手扒思小作文高分表达

renovation of a museum addition of extra facilities

gave way to is arranged as

newly established transformed to

fully take advantage of serving different purposes

left wing relocated

雅思小作文范文

The pair of maps reveals the changes in the renovation of a museum in terms of room distributions and addition of extra facilities during a 10-year period （1998-2008）.

In 1998， on the left wing of the museum， permanent and temporary rooms occupied this area. Tem year later， the temporary rooms is relocated backward which gave way to the construction of a coat room and a shop， used to be on the left front side of museum. In addition， a part of the permanent rooms is arranged as a restaurant.

In the middle part， there was an exit， a garden and a café in order. However， some fountains were newly established in the garden and also the area of the café shrank and a washroom was built.

Turning to the right side of the museum， a shop， washroom and coat room was in the front， while In 2008， they were all transformed to be permanent rooms.

Overall， the space of this museum is more fully take advantage of than before with more amenities， better serving different purposes.（范文原创自小站老师Jeff. Lei）字数 176 words

雅思写作大作文真题：Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities. Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages？

雅思写作大作文解析：本题讨论人们更喜欢网交流而不是面对面交流的益处是否大于弊端。题目类型是议论文的一种观点类题目，题目问问法是Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages类型，可以采用5段式作文结构。

雅思文章结构

P1：引入话题+表明观点（否定观点）

P2：指出此做法的的优势：可以一定程度上帮助人们释放压力；

P3：指出此做法的弊端：对人们的心理健康有害；

P4：指出此做法的弊端：降低工作和学习效率。

P5：总结：概括文章内容和重申观点。

雅思写作高分表达

Indulge in 沉溺于

Daily routine 日常生活

Under intense pressure 压力很大

In this case 在这种情况下

Vulnerable 脆弱的

real-world problems 现实世界问题

Take a heavy toll on 对...有负面影响

Distraction 分心的事物

Put simply 简单来说

Be addicted to 沉溺于

雅思写作高分结构

No matter how 让步状语从句

It is a fact that .... and that... 同位语从句

... 平行结构

Release and reduce 押头韵

......， an unhealthy lifestyle that 概括性同位语

Never will this be 部分倒装结构表达强调

雅思写作范文

Indulging in the social networks to chat with online friends，compared with face-to-face communication， seems to become a daily routine for almost all people， no matter how old they are. But this preference is more detrimental to people involved.

Communicating with online friends appears to be a much easier and more acceptable way to relieve stress. It is fact that people， including working *s and students， are under intense pressure from work， study， and emotional life， and that they are reluctant or unwilling to share their life with friends and neighbours in the real-world for different reasons. In this case， the sharing of a tough point or some bad experiences， such as conflicts between colleagues ， the complaints of the work， or peer pressure is a seemingly strange yet safer way to release and reduce the pressure that can hardly be shared with best friends and people in their local community.

However， staying in touch with online friends will make people more emotionally vulnerable than traditional communication do. All people indeed do not live in a virtual world but are surrounded with people like family members， colleagues and neighbour in this physical world. If always chatting with a stranger online， they will spend less time with those real people who are important for them and who will help them when they are helpless with read-world problems， an unhealthy lifestyle that is more likely to result in such emotional illness as isolation ， depression， and even auti*.

This preference also takes a heavy toll on employees’ productivity and students’ academic performance. Using the Internet to work and study is as normal as having a breakfast these days. Under this circumstance， either workers or students while working or studying are easily to stay active on social networks rather on focus on their job or study，and it is a dangerous distraction to decrease work and study efficiency. Put simply， this habit that people are addicted to online conversation， instead of talking with real people ，is more time-wasting than productive and efficient.

In conclusion， feasible as it is in the stress reduction， giving preference to virtual communication rather than socialising with real people in the real world does harm to the emotional health of people and the improvement of work or study efficiency and never will this be beneficial to people in the long term.（字数 336words）

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